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what have you done?



what have you done?
a shadow of betrayal as emotions twist.
once we drank of innocence,
wide-eyed and untainted,
but your thirst vanished.
a deadened pool of lies -
emotions follow pain, follow death,
love burnt to ashes.
in a burst of bitterness,
i condemn you.

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  • Swords in Ice
    May 22, 2008

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    Well lets see...

    Comdemn: Put target attacking creature on the bottom of its owner's library. Its controller gains life equal to its toughness.


    0.o Yeah put that person on the bottom of his library you'll never see him again Mwahaha (I am such a Goofball Geek)

    Not one of your better poems hun :/ But I'm guessing this was just putting down words on paper, so I can forgive you (Somewhat )

    Take care xx