I hear the silence in your eyes,
laughter in your smile
smell the sunshine in your heart
and see perfection about you.
A contest entry
- QUICKIE: BEAUTY by Lotus-Mama.
625 points, ended May 15, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Lovely! A sentiment filled with a beautiful and endearing sense of affection. Very well spoken!!! Great take on the prompt indeed!
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This is lovely, Garrison. Wonderful "attack" on the senses here (well, actually attack is the wrong word)... i should rather say enchantment.
silence, eyes, smiles, sunshine, heart, laughter, love... some of the most beautiful things in this time called life. Beautifully soft this is.
~ Nicolette
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I like this one a lot... mostly because you gave us unexpected little twists with your pairing of the senses with images they are not usually associated with (i.e. - "smell the sunshine").
Beautiful.
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Congratulations on your Silver, Garrison!
It is a truly beautiful poem, tactile and endearing. Loved the use of senses ... it is sensual.
Blessed be.
Myra
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beautiful sentiments
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This is amazing! I love it!
Thanks for entering!
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