I'll make your heart jump like it was on cocaine
Sorry dosn't mean a damn thing coming out of your lips,dollface
If you think you could ever just walk into my life again...
Then, sweetie, you're sorely mistaken.
Bitch please? It's more like Hoe take a seat
And listen up.
I'm the best damn thing to ever walk across your life.
And don't you forget it.
Author notes
you shouldn't have ever stabbed me in the back bitch. Cause bad things happen and I'm the worse bitch to mess with.
Comments
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Very...interesting...
Good Points: I can see the anger and raging emotions as though they were a fire burning in my face...or as though it were ME who backstabbed you LOL.
Bad Points: This poem needs a bit more structure to it...the lines are sort of going ....haywire
If you would like some help on forming a basic flow or structure to a poem...ask me. (im not sure if you will need to, you have lots of talent
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ASM
AKA Raymond
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