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Too Late

As the snowflakes fall,
And the sunsets pale,
Mountains rise,
And oceans rage.

How long will it take?
How long 'til it breaks?
What more do we need?
What more can we see,
Before it's all too late?

"Flashing..."
"Raging..."
"Tormenting..."
And "Horrible..."
We are the leaders,
Let's step up and lead.

Take hold, hand in hand.
Take heed, one last chance.
I know it can't be too late.

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Writing that makes me want to send it out to politicians LoL.

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  • Ana-Andrea
    June 6, 2008

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    I like it! I like what you're saying, as well as the way that you say it. The style is original and attractive - I think it works well. Good job!