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To feel





A naked cell
imagine an explanation
in lines, curves of
intoxication.

On tip of fingers
weave maps
an anxiety
to feel touches.


















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Prompt: Beauty

22 words

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  • Lotus-Mama
    May 15, 2008

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    I absolutely love the flow. The words you have chosen sing and dance to the rhyme of beauty perfectly! Bravo!