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Water

Water endlessly flows
  and drifts...
Painting paths
  and
Carving valleys
Calling out...
Listen to my echoes
Sing...

dragonheart1

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  • Patpowers silver member
    May 15, 2008
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    I will say that this work of poetry is refreshing to read with its theme of water. Good job again!!


  • marlene47 silver member
    May 15, 2008
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    "Listen to my echoes/Sing," great words for the endless flow of water.
    Marlene


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 15, 2008

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    Water is a powerful force.. we take it for granted...

    Lovely write!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 14, 2008
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    Just lovely and immensely creative... x