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Disappearing Palaces


Frozen    spires    of    water    hang
like  upside  down  glass  castles
glistening    in    the    sun's
evanescent  rays,  slowly
dripping  diamond
tears  of
joy













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prompt- beauty

A contest entry

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  • McRae by nature
    May 23, 2008

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    Wow. I see icicles everywhere when I read this, and they are some of the most beautiful works of nature. Congrats on the trophy.

    Carrie


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    May 15, 2008
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    wow i think this is amazing...congrats on the bronze


  • Lotus-Mama
    May 15, 2008
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    Pristine

    Beautiful words and form. This IS beauty!! Thank you for entering.