Lonesome days
Pass me by
Oars in my hands
I make my way up
The river
Of lost souls
Author notes
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A contest entry
- 10/20/20 PIF........ Come on in.... by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 14, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like the image of traveling through loneliness, it's a very powerful image.
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wow full of emotion
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Amazing to read..lost souls
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Aww... such sadness... the river of lost souls.. really tugs at the heart!!
THank you
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