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Sunday.

Fascinated , watching
me
      float
              on pristine waters.

Cherry scenery compliments my pigtails
 

     and
             my smile.
                             On this sunny scintillating Sunday.

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  • Life Is A Game
    May 17, 2008

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    Wow, this is beautifull. I loved the way you described the background as cherry. Really great imagry, thanks for writing!!


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    May 15, 2008

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    Cin, this is lovely. Oh *sigh* for a sunny scintillating Sunday. Well done to you, thanks for the great write. Love Juls


  • Lady Australis silver member
    May 15, 2008
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    beautiful sissy
    love you


  • Venugopal gold member
    May 15, 2008
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    captivating read like your smile 'dear sister'


  • Cannonsfire
    May 14, 2008
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    Very prettily arranged in thoughts and in words. Love, C

  • abyssal
    May 14, 2008
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    Very sunny. It makes me feel like I'm floating on a boat.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    Cute! A very pretty take on the pic.. made me feel I was out happy and free in the beautiful sunshine!
    Thank you


  • perfectsunset gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    Wow, you blew me away with yours beautiful words darl!!! I LOVE this piece, with the cute pigtails and complimentary smile and Sundays A treasure! Good luck in Jacs contest

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