~ Amid the sweet advances ...
of Autumn dreams, arrives one kinder reasoning,
awakening, upon the truth envisioned of it's humble reality. ~
~ Written for You By: ~ James Lee Long ~
A contest entry
- 10/20/20 PIF........ Come on in.... by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 14, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please let me know how it makes you feel, and the insight that it gave you... if any!
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I don't like the cold weather, but I always enjoy the leaves and poems such as these. Great job!
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a very deserving silver. well done and fantastic write! as always xo
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No surprise about the silver trophy for this entry. Congratulations. Liked the presentation on this page as well.
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Wonderful
Terrific take on the picture. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Very pretty! Love the ending.. gives the passion a softness about it... we are all humbled in love!
Thank you
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Very beautifully said...
Blessings
~CherylAnn~
To add to the comment...Reality is often a rude awakening and when one searches for truth...the eyes are opened and realization makes for sarcasm to make one become humbled in a contrite way...Hope the understanding on my part was better this time...
Blessings
~CherylAnn~
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