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Into the Fire

Finally unafraid
yet still minutely
t i m i d
I venture forward
and ask the fair maiden to dance,
igniting a natural
i n f e r n o





Author notes

Loved the point of view of the small rabbit. Had to run with it...

Contest -- 20 words on this pic:
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  • CherylAnn
    May 14, 2008

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    A little on the weird side of natureYet a good way to get outside the box...
    Blessings
    ~CherylAnn~


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    May 14, 2008

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    isnt the treason in trust..credit thing something that is supposed to be in poem for my contest lol...

  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    May 14, 2008
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    wow thats heaps good darl...mine is shit lol, i like insluded the rbbit but i so definetly did not think out of the box...at least I tried writing have had a quiet day or two lol

    Good luck, love this


    Cin


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    Aww how cute! Very lovely take on the pic, and from the rabbits view.. adorable! Thank you

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