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Autumn Daydreams

Adrift in my mind
on a cool autumn day
Creating magical friends
on this calm stream
A gentleness within myself

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Artist credit: http://cryingsorceress.deviantart.com/art/friendship-67237455

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    May 27, 2008

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    For as the mind sets adrift, so the magic steps in...a gentleness within the heart allows the calm to take part...pure magic my friend that you have weave for us to readCool...niaish so much and congrats again


  • Olivias Violin
    May 15, 2008
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    Very Creative


  • perfectsunset gold member
    May 15, 2008

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    Aww beautifully written! Bringing the picture to life so vibrantly. Congrats on the trophy


  • CherylAnn
    May 14, 2008

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    This is soft yet sweet...A peaceful feel to the pen...
    Blessings
    ~CherylAnn~


    • buffsab99
      May 15, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you. This was a very serene calming picture to work with.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    Love that last line.. we must be gentle to ourselves... such a serene feel in this! Thank you


    • buffsab99
      May 15, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you hun. This was a nice calming picture to work with

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