Desultory soul,
drifting upon murky waters.
Solidarity; her sole companion.
A fragile heart,
longing for compassion.
Won't somebody console her?
Author notes
Pic is prompt!!
Artist credit: http://cryingsorceress.deviantart.com/art/friendship-67237455
20 words.
A contest entry
- 10/20/20 PIF........ Come on in.... by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 14, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Poems by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended May 26, 2008, 179 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Thank you for entering my short poems contest. This is a very interesting take on the picture that prompted this poem.
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i like this
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Sad...a lonely soul is always an empty heart...such a tenderly sad piece here,makes my heart just break for her...yet works wonderfully for the picture prompt...
Blessings
~CherylAnn~
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Aww.. makes me want to console her! Sad and beautiful! Thank you
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