Holding You
Tightly,
Closely.
Clinging to Your warmth.
Shrinking from the cold breeze of separation.
i need You
As i need air
You are my past,
You are my future.
I wait for You,
For Oour time.
The night sky,
dark with doubt,
Sparkles with the hope I fine in Your eyes
Oh sweet love, my Prince of forever
Make my dreams, Oour my reality,
Make my hopes, Oour tomorrow.
Make me Yours once again,
But this time
Let’s make it for always.
A contest entry
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For "Our" time (sp)
Tender and compelling -
very honest, thank you for entering.
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This poem is so full of a demand for security. I can hear it in the images and I find it in the words. It makes the poem ache and yearn almost burn on the page. Very immediate, very much in the present. Very good.
Love, Tom B.
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Thank You Sir, i am glad You enjoyed it, as it was written on my heart long before the page.
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