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Painted Moments

Waters flavor bursts forth,
ravaging illustrious perfection.

Gallops paste cleaver concepts,
painting natures chosen distinction.

Tapestries long imprisonment,
hanging upon classical creations.

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Prompt: Beauty

22 words

Rules, must not use words beauty or beautiful in body of poem.

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  • Lotus-Mama
    May 15, 2008

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    I love the flow of the words you have chosen! A symphony of sounds! Thank you so much for entering!!


  • buffsab99
    May 14, 2008

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    Beautiful

    I can use the word in the comment because it describes what you have written so well