When I looked in your eyes I saw my future unfold
Unveiling mysteries, stories yet to be told
A love so intense, beyond imagination
Girl, I must admit, you got my attention
With a touch of your hand all doubt was erased
My insides shook, I longed for your embrace
With a kiss from your lips it was all over for me
My eyes were opened and I started to see...
All I want is you next to me
From this point forward thru eternity
An attraction so deep it just blows my mind
One look at you I knew you were one of a kind
Your name on my lips, your touch on my skin
I knew you were the one: you touched my soul deep within
From the Heavens above, 'twas like I heard God speak
How else could I explain that our souls were to meet?
So I lift a prayer to the Lord everyday
Praising Him that miracles still come true today
You are the only woman with whom I will be
From this point forward thru eternity
This passion that we feel inside, it will never be denied
As long as we're side by side, always and forever
No matter what we go through this love will be true
As long as it's me and you, always and forever
In a list
A contest entry
- Talk To Me Of Love by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended May 19, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - It's Almost Like Being in Love by willowprincess.
1000 points, ended May 31, 2008, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - love by siddy jones.
317 points, ended June 4, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Several Options - Celebrations and Fanfic by SexyAngel0418.
600 points, ended August 9, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sappy love poems by crazymomma.
800 points, ended July 27, 2008, 64 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very very sweet write.
I think the cliches really add meaning to it.
I loved reading this.
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Wonderful! This is the kind of love everyone wants and few find it. Lucky you! Lucky she! "Always and forever" I love that! I love the entire poem because it is so full of emotion that I can relate to. But these are my favorite lines:
From the Heavens above, 'twas like I heard God speak
How else could I explain that our souls were to meet?
It is wonderful to meet someone on the soul level. You two are truly blessed always and forever!
Pam
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I wish i could add these lines from Luther Vandross to the ending, "Everday loves me your own special way ...with a smile". I am hearing a lot of R&B-soul music today so this work appeals to me a lot and generally, I like it. It brings back memories to me, though they are bitter-sweet but they are part of my story.
I enjoyed it.
Merci
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Always believe that God has something in store for you. Your poem touched me, almost like you were reading a little of my mind. Excellent job....glad you shared.
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Wonderful write here
Its so truly a blessing to know this love good write here
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This is very beautiful and passionate, but I can't help but think it's just a tad cliche.
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The Gift of Love
This is a great write..only the Lord could create a miracle of love that you two share.Im so happy you love Lisa with all your heart..shes very special to me...and deserves the "Best" in life..glad you are the one.
Luv,
Aunt Connie
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Perfect rhyme and flow..Wonderful loving sentiment all the way through. The contentment of relationship makes this poem like a flowing stream, a rippling brook taking one to a utopia of total satisfaction about being in love...Bravo!
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wow
sound like a one in a lifetime kind of love....and the poem an't bad either (hahaha) i hope you always feel as you do now and always love as strong as you have writen....wonderful share and hope to read more of your work
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Very touchy , must be a beautiful Lady by your side. Do let her read it ,very beautifully done.Thanks for sharing .
Susan
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so sweet
wow i love it, its so sweet && its mostly what makes me like the poem coz it expresses so much about how much you show that you love that person... && i truly love it
good poem
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Such a sweet poem, I really enjoyed reading this. Whoever this girl is must be lucky to have a guy who cares about her in that way.
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nice love poem i enjoyed the read
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Again...
I can't take my eyes off this poem tonight, reminding what God has put together and how much I love you.
All we are and all we will be together will be worth any struggle we go through in life.
Love ...this is just the beginning...and we are blessed to have a lifetime of adoration, mutual respect, making love and adventures!
I love you Tim
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Lifetime, baby
I love you, too, Lisa~
Tim
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Wow. this is a very touching poem. It's so beautiful and well thought out. I really enjoyed reading it. Good work
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It is obvious that these words come straight from the heart. Only true love can touch a soul and this must be it. This is so sweet and romantic and just all together wonderful. Thanks for entering and good luck
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Nice love story. Thank you for entering my contest.
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Aaaaawwwweee what increible love you have for this woman great job and thank you for entering my contest.
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Aaaaawwwweee what increible love you have for this woman great job and thank you for entering my contest.
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awww... that's such a sweet poem, it could be wedding vows... thank you so much for entering!!!! I'm giving you 3 applause, 2 for the poem, and an extra for being the first to enter!!!
Beth
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Awhh, how sweet is this? I can relate so much to this. Love is a wonderful feeling, it changes your life completely. I liked your rhyming in this, not forced at all. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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that was beautiful. that was a great love poem. i loved it. good luck in the contest.
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Though I have not seen the woman you are pourtraying here yet you showed me the beuty of her..and that is the strength this beautiful verse..well done...
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Thank you, I genuinely appreciate your comments & repect you and your work - this comes as a great honor to me and I am humbled...
This is who this write was for, my muse, my Beloved...This is my portrait of her:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4270223
She's the one who asked if she could call you Mr. P because she had a hard time pronouncing your name
~Tim
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that is so sweet! so full of your love. great job!
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great
your poem is very lovely!!! great write!!good luck in the contest you are in.
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Xianaria my love,
Congrats on your honorable mention!!
I am so happy for you sweetheart!
Remember to always believe in your talent!!!
I believe in you!
Your
Lifetime
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Sooo very beautiful this is!
I loved every line of your piece
A most wonderful write of love
Thank you for sharing and the best of luck to you in the contest
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This must be one of the most beautiful "love songs" I have read in a long time!
Very well done! this is a piece straight from the heart and the emotion that flows from this is so deep and true!
It's stunning!
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Sweetheart
I am reading this over again,everytime i read my heart melts.
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Excellent I Am Mezmerized !
This is such a touching, wonderful,and full of intence emothions that are so very well written.All I want is you next to me-From this point forward thru eternity.As well as From the Heavens above,'twas like I heard God speak-How else could I explain that our souls were to meet? I really love the whole poem but these were a few that jumped out to me that I know are oh so true. Good Luck ! And God Bless You ! Brenda Gae
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Xianaria
For once in my life i have no words. I am speechless and so amazed that these words poured out like a soft waterfall, full of expressions of love for me.
My heart is weeping tears of joy that you love me this deeply.
I as a poet am so impressed and amazed!
You take my breath.
Your
Lifetime
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My Beloved Lifetime~
Like so many songs I share with you, you inspire me to find the words to share with you my heart. You are my muse, my inspiration, my Beloved Lifetime.
You own my heart, what comes out of it is yours.
Your Xianaria
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