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Still wishing

Soft texture
Fragile as a flower
Pale and tan mixture
Rests at this hour
Eyes brown
Looks happy even with a frown

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think and ways to improve. Thanks

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  • XxForeverFaithfulxX
    June 12, 2008
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    Nice

    This is beautiful. Short and sweet. I like it. Keep up the good work!^_^


  • Lotus-Mama
    May 15, 2008
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    This is very cute!!! Thank you so much for entering!


  • CherylAnn
    May 14, 2008
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    Awwwwwww that was really beautiful...
    Best of Luck
    Blessings
    ~CherylAnn~