Impulse.. striking inside lightning bolt.
Fearing of the drowning boat.
Kindest man gets rejections.
Self esteems broken down in life’s sections.
Largest heart. for someone else’s triumph.
Always stomped on victim of violence.
Constantly wishing to just to be loved.
Too many times feelings been crushed.
Dark clouds will cover then thunder will boom.
Then a great man will evolve he will show, Who is Who.
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This Poem is all Me ... JackReed3..
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