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Farewell, My Angel

Goodbye, my sunshine
Farewell, my angel
Until this life ends
And I see you again

I lie in darkness
Tossing and turning
In the void you left behind

I still hear my own screams
I still feel the agony in my heart
Spilling out of my eyes
And onto my father’s shirt
As I grappled with the gut-wrenching news

It was too soon...
I wasn’t ready...
I was waiting to see you...
I was going to hold you close again
I was going to feel you in my arms
I was going to stroke your face and kiss your head
I was going to hear you purring in my ear...

I wanted to feel your whiskers tickling my neck
I wanted to hear you meowing
I wanted to feel you pawing at my necklaces
I wanted to crawl into bed, and battle with you for control of the blanket
I wanted to see you sneak inside my guitar case...just once...

I didn’t want to feel my face go numb
I didn’t want to scream myself hoarse
I didn’t want my body to wrack with sobs
Baby kitty, why now?
Why did you have to leave me here?
The family will never be the same without you

Goodbye, my sunshine
Farewell, my angel
Until this life ends
And I see you again


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  • allygirl87
    January 25

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    awww this was beautiful... i felt this way when my kitty died....

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    June 13, 2008

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    the emotions weaved amongst all your words aid in the reader being able to share in your pain. this was indeed sad, but well written.


  • blondevamp
    May 17, 2008

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    yes like kat saiod it is a simply beautiful poem but terribly, terribly sad. im so sorry that this happened babe.


    • Lady Voldemort silver member
      May 17, 2008
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      so am I, am I...

      you can't even imagine how sweet he was, and you only saw the lil guy once, and that was when there was a shitload of commotion, lots of people and noise, and it scared him :'(
      I miss him so much it hurts to think about it


  • The Amazon Seer
    May 15, 2008
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    simply beautiful

    yet very sad

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