My baby is far away
and that's so hard
i miss him so much
when i sit in my yard
i sip on some lemonade
and picture his face
oh! babe, come back to me
please, won't you race
i dream about you at night
once the sun has set
i picture u here
but your not here yet
your body naked next to mine
would be o so nice
maybe we can play with fire
maybe we'll do it twice (or 3 times lol)
don't call me a slut
don't call me a whore
i just want you here, baby
and that's all, no more
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I miss u CRM
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pretty good the last part is really good
ur a very good poet
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I liked these lines
'Your body naked next to mine
would be so nice
maybe we can play with fire
maybe we'll do it twice (or 3 times lol'...
Wish you a happy reunion, honey!

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Wonderfully Written My Friend !
You have written a very nice write here. it shows all of your true emothions.I dream about you at night once the sun has set.these are word's that I found very touching,and written so nicely. I know how you really feel for My Baby is away from me ! Good Luck ! Brenda Gae



