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[ My baby is far away ]

My baby is far away
and that's so hard
i miss him so much
when i sit in my yard

i sip on some lemonade
and picture his face
oh! babe, come back to me
please, won't you race

i dream about you at night
once the sun has set
i picture u here
but your not here yet

your body naked next to mine
would be o so nice
maybe we can play with fire
maybe we'll do it twice (or 3 times lol)

don't call me a slut
don't call me a whore
i just want you here, baby
and that's all, no more

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  • forgedreality
    May 15, 2008
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    pretty good the last part is really good
    ur a very good poet


  • Galaxy2
    May 15, 2008

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    I liked these lines

    'Your body naked next to mine
    would be so nice
    maybe we can play with fire
    maybe we'll do it twice (or 3 times lol'...

    Wish you a happy reunion, honey!

  • Wonderfully Written My Friend !

    You have written a very nice write here. it shows all of your true emothions.I dream about you at night once the sun has set.these are word's that I found very touching,and written so nicely. I know how you really feel for My Baby is away from me ! Good Luck ! Brenda Gae