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Salvation *not religious*

Wandering, lost
And then I see your face
And I feel good

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I wanted to try a haiku, lemme hear what u gotta say

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 29, 2008

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    what a plain truth you brought with a straigtforward message in it... love this wonderful piece.... my friend...