Your lies tingle down my spine
As I walk by and roll my eyes
Your words like venom
Eating at my every move
My every step
In the direction you want
I love the way you twist things
Making them seem so tainted
Hilarious the things they believe
As if I'm the devil in disguise
Well I can't wait to see your face
The day you come to that holy place
And I won't let your sorry ass in the door
Author notes
I hope this isn't too bad and you can read it Thanks
A contest entry
- !GOSSIP! by ForeverLastingComa.
450 points, ended May 18, 2008, 18 entries
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People don't see the world as it is, but as they are.
I have been in this position, and identify with the hurt and bitterness between the lines. Images and concise words make a strong impression. The last three lines made me smile; I wish I had been so wise twenty years ago.
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Wow this is a good write, and goes with the topic well. I love the first six lines the best for they could be understood in many different ways. and the end is funny. Great write!! good luck
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very nice. i think my favorite part is "Well I can't wait to see your face
The day you come to that holy place
And I won't let your sorry ass in the door"
well penned
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Brutally beautiful.
"I wont let your sorry ass in the door"
LMAO
I wish i hadnt been in that position so many times..someone making me the bad guy when Im not =P -
this is how i feel, people could talk crap all they want but when they really need me or when it's jusgment day it's their business and their ass thats gonna be scrubbed down to the dirt
thank you for entering and good luck =)
ForeverLastingComa aka Leesha
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