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staple-wired

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exhaling words is different
from breathing --

lips must speak first
with brain,

and understand
the logical dialect.















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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 15, 2008

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    "Understand the logical dialect," very different from just breathing.
    Good advice, poetically said.
    Marlene

  • tara wilson gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    you are always great at brevity...excellent thoughts here..

    best of luck...


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 14, 2008
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    Incredibly profound and sincerely grasping.... x


  • jasminerose
    May 14, 2008

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    A very profound piece you have penned.. truth with wisdom should always come first!
    Wonderful entry for this contest!!
    All my best to you!
    Jasminerose