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Final Destiny





Just a whisper through time
one sparkle,

so alone

as breath draws end
stars beckon

my soul~



Author notes

17 words something meaningful(not about love)

Credit: Vincent Van Gogh
http://myhero.com/images/Artist/Gogh/g1_u28661_starrynight.jpg

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  • Sonja
    May 16, 2008

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    It is not easy to write something meaningful only with 17 words but you did it my dear friend. Bravo!
    ~Sonja~


  • marlene47 silver member
    May 15, 2008

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    Beautiful description of a destiny - "a whisper through time." I like the beckoning too. So well done, gentle and deep, radiantly lonely.
    Marlene


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 14, 2008
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    Just beautiful... x


    • jasminerose
      May 15, 2008
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      Thank you Lavender as always, a pleasure to be in one of your contests
      Linda


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    May 14, 2008
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    Beautiful work hun, I love it Hugs, Bunny


  • poet2angels gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    I love this!
    Breathtaking...
    Perfect ending
    Sigh~

    Amazing 17 words...

    Lynda


    • jasminerose
      May 14, 2008
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      Awwww thank you Sis for the lovely comment!! Glad I could return a sigh~

      Jazzy


  • Kari gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    This is really beautiful. I love that graphic. I think that you did awesome in 17 words. Good luck in the contest


    • jasminerose
      May 14, 2008

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      Thank you so very much for the beautiful compliment on my entry! It is so wonderful to hear your thought on my poetry!
      Thank you
      Linda

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