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Obsession of Impurity

Bloody obsession
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Multiple personalities
Sugar and spice
Everything nice
With a pinch of deviltry
Saint of dark
Leaves her mark
Blood running down your face
Fragile life
Ruined by strife
Obsession of iniquity




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Umm, this isn't MY obsession, just to let you know. And I'm not even sure if it follows the rules of this contest, if it doesn't just let me know. Thanks.

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  • warrior-eagle
    May 15, 2008

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    It does sound good lol
    It reminded me of a rap I used to listen to ,
    anyways, it didn't break my rules
    as in..i didnt make any
    Thanks for entering

    ...Simply Me♥


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    May 15, 2008

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    i loved the rhyme scheme. i kinda wanted to start bobbing my head as I read it. haha

    and the imagery in this is nicely penned as well.


  • Confuzzled1
    May 14, 2008
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    lol idk if it makes sense or not but it sounds good yay hahahaha!!!!!! =)