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A Union of War

Stirring in passion
A union of war
Conflicting lovers
The ancients of lore

A whisper of desire
Wrapped up in ice
The fire of morning
Harmonized with night

A touch, a caress
Their gentle kiss
Two battling forces
Blended in bliss

The sun in her glory
Arrayed in her flame
The moon’s cold mystery
Clothed in frigid rain

A bond of tension
Opponents by trade
Standing on their own
Their beauty starts to fade

A marriage, a love
Their splendor creates
Separated by time
Patiently they wait

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  • lesbian-in-love
    January 4

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    Very well written. congrats on the HM. thanks for entering and best of luck to you in the contest. Also be sure to check out round 2 if you haven't thanks again!


  • purpledragonfly
    June 3, 2008
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    The flow on this is awesome, I love it! Wonderful!!


  • greyhaime
    May 30, 2008
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    thanks for entering the contest, I liked this one alot,
    cheers
    Grey


  • Childsight
    May 14, 2008

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    breath taking!

    Bravo, Bravo darling! excellent job! it makes me shiver. It all flows together like water in the river!

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