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I Want You

Can you see it when I look at you?
I feel so damn opaque.
The hunger that I fee inside,
Is something I just can't fake.

I long to feel your hot body,
Intertwined with mine.
Hot and sweaty, breathing hard,
Your touch is so divine.

I want to kiss your entire being,
Give you chills of pure delight.
I want to stop the sands of time,
So we can have all night.

I want to feel your heart beat hard,
With every thrust you make.
I want to feel you deep inside,
My body is yours to take.

I want to feel you tense up,
As your climax begins.
I want to hear you moan my name,
And fulfill my darkest sins.

So now you know the secret is out,
To my desires I have been so true.
I can say without a doubt,
I want you!

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  • queen Greeters member
    May 23

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    Welcome To All Poetry

    Excellent poem, this is pretty hot sounds like a good time was had by all

    Please keep writing, reading and commenting

    Barbara
    Site Greeter


  • Swangrnv
    May 17
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    bravo

    A strong first piece! pretty steamy write!

  • Alee13Soul
    May 15
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    awsom
  • This is very well written. It has a great flow.
    I see you are new to the site. Welcome to AP and I hope you enjoy it here. I look forward to reading more of your work.
    Soulful Woman

    • Thank you! This is the first piece I have ever dared to share. It is very freeing and I will be submitting more.
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