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No Concern

one life
ample strife
rellapse
collapse
you cry
you die
first thought
one shot
think twice
fresh slice
no pain
no gain
unfair game
now aflame
last chance
in a trance
no change
now estrange
last act
no impact
you lost
it cost
no concern
case adjourned.

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i doubt this actually makes sense to anyone else but me..

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  • sevnsyn silver member
    May 23, 2008
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    Well this is cool...It reminds me of a song