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Hate Becomes Weak Enough

You're too thin.
Go eat something.
Why are you eating that?
You can't do anything.
Well how the hell would you know,
You're never here.
And I don't give a damn,
I don't shed a tear.
I hate you.
I hate you the way
I should love you but don't.
Will I ever stop hating you?
Gaurantee I won't.
You stupid lying idiot.

I hate your guts more with every word.
The thoughts burn in my mind
The hatred you never heard.
You oblivious moron.
Ignorance is bliss.
I don't care
I can't deal with this.
You're never here.
I'm glad you're gone.
You don't exist to me.
Leave, so long!
I hate you
I don't care.
I hate you
But I wouldn't dare.
I can't tell you
I'm supposed to be the other way.
So I'll put up with you
Till you leave some blessed day.

Author notes

To someone special, I hope you leave and never come back.

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  • xeroabyss II
    October 30, 2008
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    @ the authors note.
    That good old human bitter spitefulness.


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 24, 2008

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    I love the title and the poem its very well written and everything :] thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck ..<3.. Shelly


  • For You. I Cry.
    May 17, 2008
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    hey babe that was really food was that about ur parents or one of our friends and btw ur not fat love u just gotta turn wat u have into muscle thats why i was thinkn if u wanted to join a kik boxing class with me itll be so much fun and we can get that very little fat we have and turn it into abs

  • purples
    May 14, 2008

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    Great piece

    I was going through something like this. I think it is a good poem with a lot of meaning. In the first few lines it sounds like 2 people are talking.


    • LittleMissFaith
      May 15, 2008
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      thank you for your comment. and yes, in the first four lines someone else is talking. the rest is consistantly the same person.

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