Petals
gracefully,
falter
between the lines of
life and death.
Weaving threads
of beauty
with natures'
fabrication.
Author notes
17words
can not be about love.
pic credit: humannature_part2_ by fredmyhead
A contest entry
- Just fabulous! by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended May 14, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Speechless
Everyone has already said pretty much everything I would say so scroll down and read all those comments again because you definately deserve them. This has got to be one of my very favs from you and I'm definately going to bookmark. grats on the silver for this most stunning write!
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hahaha thanks
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a.maz.ingg.
its so simple, yet so compelling...
congrats on the silver.
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thanks
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What a gorgeous poem! Well done on the silver... very much deserving!
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Very beautiful, somber and compassionate entry... the faltering and weaving.
Congratulations on the silver.
Marlene -
Just wonderful and that picture fits so well with your deeply grasping words... x
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Beautiful imagery of nature and life...
A wonderful entry for this contest!! I wish you all the best!
Jasminerose
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Beautiful
Such a beautiful definitation of autumn. You have written such an amazing piece. Best of luck in this contest
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Beautiful...Great job...Good luck in the contest
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I liked the idea you introduce at the beginning about petals faltering. It's interesting and it can be taken many different ways. Way to steer clear of cliches. Best of luck in the contest.
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This is really beautiful. You've done a wonderful job
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Beautiful dear..All the best! -
Excellent
Beautiful dear..All the best! -
Excellent
Beautiful dear..All the best!
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thanks
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