Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

No Natural Rose

No natural rose,
birthed of palettes,
fails to remind us of its thorns,
whose punctures drain
our lifeblood’s remembering
the pikes and fragilities.
That’s why I saw catgut,
Singing in defiant voices,
With passion and with frenzy.

Staring down down
his hollow eyes,
I exhale scorched breath
into Death’s throat,
and warn him
to be patient
in revealing
his mysteries:

"While you offer
soft promises
of peace and release,
and renewal
of wildflowers
and of grasses,
I will go to
sweet shadows
Only when
I    am    finished
blooming
and
singing."

My thorns
are not
yet done.

Author notes

Contest: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2404819

1. Picture Credit; emilieautumn2 found on www.skem9.com
2. quotes:

** "Death must be so beautiful. To lie in the soft brown earth, with the grasses waving above one's head, and listen to silence. To have no yesterday, and no to-morrow. To forget time, to forgive life, to be at peace.” ~Oscar Wilde

** "Long live the rose that grew from the concrete when no one else ever cared." ~Tupac Amaru Shakur

"catgut" n. A tough thin cord made from the treated and stretched intestines of certain animals, especially sheep, and used for stringing musical instruments and tennis rackets and for surgical ligatures.

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression? Line numbers
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?) (Line numbers)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5
  • Sigh... very lovely indeed! Are our thorns ever yet done I wonder...

    This is such a wonderful write!


    • runewalker
      May 17
      Edit | Reply
      thanks Jax. a little gift for Bella. The specters are stared down, until we are ready.

      I hope someone remembers that they used to sting violins with catgut. The pix prompt is wild.

  • runewalker
    May 14
    Edit | Reply


  • Aww wow, what a beautiful write. I love your imagery and emotion and deep thought. Wonderful take on the quote prompt! Thanks for entering & best of luck
1 - 5 of 5