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........

.falling.
you were clipped to my heart
it was simply a dead end
you tested my paitence
with endless maybes
casually breaking down my hope

.pain.
settles on the surface
of my hollow skin
excuses that never made sense
i'd lost you
in that darkness

.unforgiven.
thought to be selfish
for ever loving you.

.blindly.
I left everything up to you
and You
choose the crowd
over true love

.silence.
rain falls once more
on the cold pavement
of an empty dream.-

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  • ".silence.
    rain falls once more
    on the cold pavement
    of an empty dream.-"

    I really like the set up of this one.
    Well done! Keep up the great work!