Droplets of life,
shine in the night.
To take in my hand,
that life is grand.
Shown no mercy,
Life like Heresy.
In light of this,
I go to bliss.
Showcased in blood,
Unable to avoid the flood.
My thoughts so twisted,
These crimson tears...
Gone forever.
A contest entry
- Pain You Can't Explain And More by BlackBloodyRose.
499 points, ended May 22, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Return of the Darkwrite Challenge by Ktulu Blackwolfe.
400 points, ended June 13, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Thoughts?
Comments
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This is a nice write...although the rhyme seemed a bit forced and off, and it wasn't as dark as I had hoped it would be, going by the title...
Thanks for entering my challenge and good luck.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe** -
thank you.
I'm glad you liked it.
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i lvoe this. i read it 4 times and want to read it again. well done.
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wow
wow very strong write shown no mercy life liek heresy doesn't make much sence but good job
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