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This has GOT to change

Girls like this
are gonna get dissed

Boys like that
are gonna get fat

Life like mine
cant be defined

People like us
cause a big fuss

We cant get along
so we dont belong

Can we make this right?
And make it a might

whatever it is
we can pass this popquiz

So lets get together
and fix this once and for all

Does it make sense? Do the rhymes go with the parts?

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  • SmartBrick
    August 18, 2008

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    I liked this poem!I donno but it made sense to me!(that may be because I'm always so confused....)lol i don't know!But I found it very well written!


  • kat-mwahzz
    August 15, 2008
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    this is really great u should check my ones out and comment if u want


  • shannon.green
    May 14, 2008

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    lol. That was funny. I laughed. It's really good, I like it a lot. My fav part is "We cant get along, so we don't belong" I feel like that every day, since I'm not really in the popular crowd. This poem related to me. ha ha. Loved it.
    Shannon