Only the Wise One knows

It seems

I always loved you

Knew you were there

Deep within my heart

Wrote poetry for you..

Not knowing

Whom I was writing for

Felt your presence

My heart palled

With sweet expectations

Surely she knew.. though,

She kept me in suspense

I wish.. I had known you

When youth was tender

When life was sweet

Full of mysteries

Oh, my love.. who knows

Only the wise One does.

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"I KNEW I LOVED YOU BEFORE I MET YOU" by rinzurajan. 900 points, ended April 11, 29 entries
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rinzurajan
March 11

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wow...that was amazing...loved every line...done beautifully and more so loved it for having included God in ur love story...

good luck
LittleMoon
May 23, 2008

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If such love is returned it must be the most precious thing in your life time if not..........heartbreak and more of us seem to know about that. Niaish for sharing it with us here.
neverdie
May 20, 2008
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Is your real name John? I think your poem is wonderful. love all your poems.
SoulWhispher
May 18, 2008
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Great poem that says I love you in a new way, great job, this was from the heart, great job, John
Dark Otter
May 17, 2008
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What a wonderful way
to say "I love you."
RedwingSpirit
May 17, 2008

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Temple of Fire
awwww beautiful feel the same way about my hubby. Wish I had met him years ago. actually had a few mere run ins with him lol. And new family of his. But never met til he worked in my town. Beautiful write Sure she will love this.
Puppydog
May 15, 2008

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EMOTIONAL AND SWEET!!!!!
Most certainly she has a truly special way of bringing out the deepest feelings within your heart. 's
PoEtRyInMe
May 14, 2008

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Aww so heartfelt!
This is a wonderful poem. Judy is a very lucky lady. I hope your love is cherrished forever. Great poem, keep writting.

~Kate~