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Definition of Beaty

No longer do I fit within your boundaries
No more do I wish to starve and struggle
No loss of weight, or fat, or life
Can give her that longed for title

Beauty can not be decided by critics,
By others, less fortunate than oneself,
It is a simple, effective decision
Of looking inside, and seeing what lies within

Beauty is represented in a multitude of sizes
No longer must we meld ourselves
To fit the ideals of a brainwashed society
Now we must only fit, the criteria, of ourselves.

Every woman is beautiful however; difference, is the key
For each one has possesed a unique ingredient
A gorgeous identity, a standalone personality
Within her skin and radiating beyond

She is beautiful

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  • microwave1
    September 27, 2008

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    i like this poem it's true beauty does come from within and everyone is always quick to judge women and put them in categories when every woman stands in a unique category of their own don't you think


  • LovingAngelForever
    September 13, 2008
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    Wow, that's awesome. It's true isn't it... TRUE beauty DOES come from within. Awesome job Keira :


  • Lotus-Mama
    May 27, 2008

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    This is perfect - I it!! Nicely penned!!

    Strong beggining!!!!

    "No longer do I fit within your boundaries
    No more do I wish to starve and struggle
    No loss of weight, or fat, or life
    Can give her that longed for title"


  • SuicidalLover
    May 14, 2008

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    This is a great write, very empowering in my opinion. May I make a small suggestion though? For this line -

    "For each one has posses a unique ingredient"

    I think it would be easier to read as -
    "For each one has possessed an unique ingredient"

    Verb subject agreement.

    Great poem and I wish you luck!
    ~Kystal Angel


  • Number 13
    May 14, 2008

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    Gorgeous write!

    I love how you show that true beauty is within ourselves.

    "Beauty is represented in a multitude of sizes
    No longer must we meld ourselves
    To fit the ideals of a brainwashed society
    Now we must only fit, the criteria, of ourselves."

    Love those lines <3

    Thanks for entering ^.^

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