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Outside!

 

Shapely, curv-acious, and lusciously endowed.

My woman is the essence of all feminine beauty.

Honey, my pooh bear, why do you diet,

and take from me the joy I hold,

feastingly.

 

To whom do you compare,

your self  too? 

You are the rare beauty I chose.

I kiss and trace my fingers upon each fold,

blessed.

 

I did not marry a size three.

I married a confident woman,

who can cook!   

Sit beside me and enjoy a good meal,

memories.

 

Please baby, don't glance at pills,

promising youth and skinny-ness.

I'll walk with you, hand in hand,

if your heart worries you,

healthy. 

 

Who told my woman,

she was no longer desirable.

That she is suppose to appear,

the wire's image of a coat hanger model,

despairingly.

 

Rolling up sleeves,

inviting you outside.

For any man who dares to call

my woman fat.....

 

is dating a coat hanger model,

with silicone breasts,

living on diet pills and soda.

Who has no clue or energy,

how to love her man and family,

thoroughly, and ....nutriciously.

 

Outside!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Contest prompt: Redefining..our visual of feminine sizes.

my hubbie just weeps when I diet...
as if I'm tearing away bits and pieces of his joy slowly.
So, i threw out the scale and walk to stay in shape,
and zip it up to the size that keeps me healthy and
him smiling!

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  • Lotus-Mama
    May 27, 2008
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    Beautiful! Bravo! Absolutely true to heart!


  • moluv10
    May 16, 2008

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    This is so true sis. I love to see a woman be happy and feel free to eat what she wants when she wants. good luck in the contest.


  • Yahiko
    May 14, 2008

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    Awww this is what America needs more of right here. So many men (and women also) make such a big deal about beauty that they almost forget the personality also counts. Bravo my dear bravo.


  • lostangel07
    May 14, 2008
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    this is goregous really made me smile! I know thats how boy boy thinks! Great job
    xx


  • Kathryn Bowden
    May 14, 2008
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    love it! it really draws me in and makes me smile. good write. Good luck!
    Kathryn


  • Number 13
    May 14, 2008

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    This is simply gorgeous ♥ I love how you penned it as if it were your husband speaking, I was hoping to get mens opinions as well as females in this contest ^^ And even though it's your words, it's also his thoughts ^_^

    I think it's simply beautiful when a man loves a woman for everything she is, and not expecting or wanting her to live up to what the media considers beautiful, you know those coat hanger models you described ^.^

    Thank you for this wonderful entry ♥


  • Lucy.
    May 14, 2008

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    Brilliant! What an admirable message! Very well written, love the title!

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