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Though Far Away

Reaching out
My thoughts conspire
As countless miles
Stir desires

Enter the soul
Caress the heart
Touch to the core
The deepest parts

Pure empathy
Closest connection
Sharing the deepest
Of affections

Though far away
In need still near
Love shall entwine
Those we hold dear

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  • babydollxgonexwrong
    October 23, 2008

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    That is so true that love can overcome any physical distance. Unfortunately, it's hard to find a love that true. Thanks for entering my contest! :]


    • faderman1959
      October 23, 2008
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      My pleasure babydoll! We all hope to find that kind of love.


  • Kiss the girl--x
    May 20, 2008

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    This reminds me of my boyfriend and I, he's in south africa and i'm well... not. Although the people we hold dearest are far away, they're close in our hearts
    This was beautiful, and just lovely


    • faderman1959
      May 20, 2008
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      Why thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope everything works out great for you and your boyfriend!


  • Touchof1der silver member
    May 15, 2008

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    What wonderful words Rob! Talk about sweet beauty... this piece is drenched in it. This is absolutely breathtaking. Your words flow down the page in a river of loving admiration that is undeniable. Exquisite writing! Thank you for sharing your words with me and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use dear poet. Good luck in the contest!
    ♥ Touchof1der


    • faderman1959
      May 15, 2008
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      I'm glad you enjoyed it kimberly! The picture was so inspiring and the idea just popped into my head. I admire the person I wrote this about so much! I really enjoyed writing this! As you can see my quill is going crazy! Watch out or I might get ink all over you! Thanks for the HM also.


  • raspberry Greeters member
    May 15, 2008

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    Fader.. long sicne i came across ur work i guess Nice poem.. so sweet.. Hope all s been well with u.. :0


    • faderman1959
      May 15, 2008
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      Thanks raspberry! I hadn't written anything for many months, hence I've been flying under the radar! But in the last week or so I have been writing like crazy! I don't know where its coming form but I like it!

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