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Reap and Sow { HM }

Seeds scattered on parched soil,

Dust choking,

bare to breathe,

Raw to the hands that bleed,

Ashes grasped burning a hell,

Hourglass timed,

deception...

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 15, 2008
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    Excellent

    I wish I could write smaller pieces of art as you do but Im so darn wordy cant help it though


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    Ahh we reap what we sow... Raw power in these words that truely give such strength to the picture!
    Thank you!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    May 14, 2008

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    Well Done and full of imagery---
    Very well versed short piece!
    Good Luck in the contest, Julie!!


  • mysticstorm gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    Very nice...grat metaphor and wonderfully creative take on the picture...you always amaze me with your depth and wonderment...
    Best to you!

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