I got knocked off my boat
for three days i swam and float
and as i washed upon this mysterious i land
I knew i needed some type of friends
i made friends with the apes and made a sand buddy
I built a house but the ground got muddy
i found a crew mate and she helps me to survive
without her help i wouldnt be alive
I have feed this guy as if he were real
i teach my apes tricks so they wont steal
I never really finished the game and reading the directions is whats ke...... awww it frose............
Author notes
sims castaway
rated 10+
im 15
A contest entry
- Video Game Lovers by nathan8.
610 points, ended May 23, 2008, 11 entries
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hehe. hilarious. I love your poetery style it's so random and different. Great poem. I like the last line
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I thought this was funny. My boyfriend plays a lot of games! I play a few, played Sims on my old computer, was fun! I never read the directions either & couldn't get it out of French! But the game was given to me from a friend that didn't have the directions anymore! Thank you for the laugh & sharing! In Love & Light... ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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i really like the detials you have put into this poem and the flow was nice, thank you for entering Nathan's contest good luck and keep up the great writing, -Amy
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this sounds like a cool game, its a nice flowing rhyme -Nathan8
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LOL!
Cute!! I'm not a HUGE gamer, but I saw the humor!
Mylee
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