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Out of this World

Missing image
His words beguiled,
stranger met in bar, 
motel room night
traveled to ecstasy's stars.

Discovering truth later,
about his being alien,
when she became carrier 
of extraterrestrial disease,
life, out of this world,
when you melt
those you touch.

Author notes

Credit Artist: Everything you touch by larafairie

http://larafairie.deviantart.com/art/Everything-you-touch-62413777

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    Well gosh!! That was indeed a unique take.. very captivating.. how fab!! And kinda spooky! hehe
    Thank you!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    May 14, 2008
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    WOW!!---Very Unique take on the Prompt---Interesting!!
    Good Luck in the contest!!


  • jcat gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    and yet another magnificent piece by you!!! Best wishes here....


  • Desire gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    Wowzers!!

    Oh My Word and Wonderful take on the prompt along with images~ reminds me of Rogue in a sense from X-Men
    Oy!!
    This certainly gives much to ponder
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweetness
    Best wishes too
    and my Love~ Desire~*~


  • StarEyes
    May 14, 2008

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    WOW!!! This is beyond words! Love the images you painted with this words! Makes one stop and think... always before you leap into anything, know what you are getting yourself into...

    Best of luck in this contest!!

    and love

    Nyetta

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