I prayed last night for the first time in two years,
a prayer of need and greed.
I don't think God cares, if he's even there
I asked for you and me and for all eternity
So when I wake up will you be there?
Passed out in less than necessary circumstances
Will it be my imagination? Should i wake you?
Or watch you sleep in peace and dream about days to come,
We have forever, That is what i asked God for
And God answers prayers right?
Please please, tell me i'm right
please please, give me your heart
You have to cause i sold my soul to the devil and i gave my life to the Lord.
I've got nothing left but a wish i made upon a star, a horse shoe that hangs above my door and this clover i keep in a locket shut tight, along with your picture, this is what i wish for. i keep it close to my heart, cross my fingers and pray for your love.
These superstitions keep me going, I know its all fake, just like the rest. But i need all the help I can get.
A boy like you and a girl like me, that would never be destiny.
What do you think?
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awww i like it!! i really love the whole part that starts, "You have to cause i sold my soul to the devil..." i cant pick out a single line from that part, its all so cute! and i totally know how it goes, when i was in love i did everything i normally never do, you know, dream, pray, hope, wish and so on, cause normally all they get you is pain, haha i wrote one on that, pretty much the opp huh? lol anyways, yah, its what ya do when your in love lol, thanks for the read! i liked it!
~kami
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awww, awesome poem love
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urm,,,
i think.. you have... wrong intentions? i am not shur. your poem... i didnt like it. i am sorry. i am so confused on what you meant though, and i read it twice. god should be your fist love. but what did you mean? maybe if i understood it i would understand. -
I could definitely feel a deep longing here as I read this poem. Sure, God answers prayers, but not always with a "yes." Just like parents cannot always say yes to their children without putting them in danger.
Hopefully though, this love will be a real one for you...if this is based on real life.
I do think that God appreciates prayers spoken with true faith in Him as savior, creator and ruler of the universe...sometimes I've had the tendency to use Him as somewhat of a good-luck charm (it sounds like you've done the same). He doesn't work that way. All my best wishes to you!
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Interesting Piece
A cry for acknowledgement, but sometimes God answers in whispers "wait." If you truly want an answer, see:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4190171 -
you are so earnest and full of longing in this piece- and i love the line, "passed out in less than necessary circumstances"
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Well written and strong...deep and unique..."sold my soul to the devil and gave my life to God"...very thought provoking...
Welcome to AP!
Best,
mystic
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