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Forbidden.

The fruit has been anointed
by enticements seduction.

It glares with emerald eyes
tempting you, to it's midsts.

Knowing too well, of formidable danger
you try ever hard, to stay strong.

With velveteen softness
it appeals to your senses.

Trying to attract your attention
with a ravenous force.

Keeping your composure
you move away, although flinching.

Knowing you have conquered
the wiles of forbidden love from a Vampire.

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  • Oooo.
    I like where you've gone with this prompt.
    It's short but it's the exact kind of... vampire
    poem that I was looking for.
    Excellent write!