God pick me up,
as I drink from your loving cup.
Enlighten me to see and touch,
the beauty beneath the darkened seams.
Add to my life a gentle kindness
and a tad of cream.
Allow me to see beyond the blackness
and shower me with beautiful dreams,
that continue to stream in my time of need.
I know you will carry me
through the madness.
In Jesus name I believe,
as He walks with me
and holds close, little Chloe Lane.
Selah'
Author notes
Aw so now the secret is out as to why I don't try to write rhyme, *hugs* Cathy I hope this lifts your spirits when you are feeling down.
And yes your black coffee did inspire this a bit...
Hugs
A contest entry
- #75 Short Prayers by daviscth.
300 points, ended May 28, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful Little write Good luck with it
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I love this and your rhyme is fine ~ very inspirational ~best of luck in the contest
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This is an amazingly beautiful poem!!!
I'll never look at coffee in the same way again!
The background is so beautiful! I just love it. How sweet of you to make this for Chloe and me.
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wonderful prayer and the picture fits. Lets you know where chloe lane is. Its so peaceful in the arms of the lord. gold in my opion
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Such a lovely prayer! your lines flows very well with beautiful imagery. A cup of coffee as metaphor
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Beautiful
This is absolutely Beautiful!!
Beautiful and so appropriate!!
Excellent and heartfelt Prayer--
Gold in my opinion!
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Very touching
nice read, nice rhyming.
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