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Paradise Found

At last

Stars are
Great drops
Of
Golden dew...

The air enters lungs
Easily
Without a cough

And the Sun
Never burns
Only gently,
Warmly caresses

At last
We have reached
Paradise

Author notes

"Stars are great drops of golden dew." -Langston Hughes

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    May 31, 2008

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    oh this is wonderfully done.

    "And the Sun
    Never burns
    Only gently,
    Warmly caresses".... Love that part.

    Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • coffeeangel316
    May 27, 2008

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    Paradise sounds wonderful to me. great take on the prompt. I love Langston Hughes. this is such a peaceful write. I loved reading it.