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Leaving The Blind

You've got stars in your eyes love,
Not a surprise.
But can't you see through my disguise?
Have you forgotten,
Our past clashes?
Just teary flashes,
In the funeral ashes.
The autumn leaves,
Are falling quick.
Another friend leaves,
To escape our slick.
The brief encounter,
Will soon be ending.
With smiles,
My lies i am defending.

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  • Option number please.... Thanks.

    Not bad. A little rudimentary, but overall a good write. Thank you for entering my contest.

    • greatrix
      June 16
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      Option 2, thanks for comment; your right on the old rudimentary front but just felt like entering with a quick write.