When you appeared in my state
In my space
In my town...
You get the message...
I was excited
Thrilled that you would come here
To see me
Even if it was only for a day
Which ended up getting to be
A whole week
Thank God
Speaking of thanking the Almighty
I now thank Him every day
Because you were here
Visiting me
Giving me advice
On what to do next
And thank you too
You gave me the time of my life
I know my heart is safe with you
Between you and him
I know I can't go wrong
But now
You're back home
And I'm missing you like crazy
Why?
Because I love you
You make me the luckiest girl alive
Thank you.
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dedicated to someone very special
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I know everyone involved had a great time, but I'm not sure that makes you the luckiest girl alive (but wil take that as a humbling compliment). The greatest thing about giving advice is that the experience which came through living it first, inturn can be accepted with open arms. It was a fantastic time and will always be treasured without a doubt. Thank you for such hospitality and a dedication.
With lots of love,
Ted E
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