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Here's My Heart, Lord

My precious Chloe
since your absence
I find I need God more.

From my lips
to God's ears
I need healing; I'm sore.

Yes, the heart aches
Tender to the touch
'Cause I love you, yea, this much.

Precious Father
hold my heart
so that it won't come apart.

Hold my hands
when darkness falls
and, give me open ears
for your calls.

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  • Judith Chandler
    May 18, 2008

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    'hold my heart
    so that it won't come apart'

    What beautiful and helpful lines.

    A very touching write.


  • daviscth silver member
    May 15, 2008

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    This is such a wonderful prayer poem. Short and filled with love. Thanks so much for writing this for me.


    • 2lullabyhaven
      May 18, 2008
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      You are so very welcome for sure...I hope you are touched for the betterlol


  • individuality gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    a good piece, maybe one day i will write a prayer poem, it is something i do not have written though i do have a lot of religious poetry

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