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Eulogy for the Hopeless and Dead


i can't take it anymore
I'm running to the door
Trip, fall to the floor
This jagged piece of glass
tastes like sweet revenge
as it slowly breaks the skin
that i am so trapped in

So when will you leave it alone?
let this wound scab,
wipe the blood off your face, and that crazy smirk too
I can see that this pain isn't ever going to be great enough for you.
There is no satisfaction in all of this

These pills just taste the same,
all white and all plain.
This void inside me that they fill, don't you remember?
That's the place where you ripped out my soul and
Let me know that it would never be enough for you
Well i can't hurt anymore, the greatest pain has been reached
But still you are not satisfied

You watch me bleed, you saw me stumble and fall
You even watched me lose sight of it all
Your eyes just gleamed with delight
While i laid dying, i had lost the fight,
And your lips cracked a smile, as i drew my last breath
And a single tear, i spilled for you
I embraced death.

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  • KaleighCurbStomp
    May 15, 2008

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    ohmy.
    This is a pretty amazing poem if I do say so myself.
    :]

    very well written.


  • greyhaime
    May 15, 2008
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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    WElcome to the site hun and wow great piece here!I really liked this one. it's worded well and the flow is really good.if you have any questions or need any help with the site please feel free to drop a line and I'll do what I can to help you out.
    well done again and keep it flowing,
    Cheers
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  • Phoenix Shadow
    May 14, 2008
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    wow, awesome piece

    Welcome to AP luvly, no more promoting in chatterbox tho!