Time to let go,
Of this pain,
Time to forget,
This eternal rain.
Time to let go,
Of him.
Time to forget,
Falling off of a limb.
Stop reaching my hand out,
And searching for his hand,
When I know,
It's buried beneath the sand.
Stop putting salt into the wound,
And it comes through the blood,
Stops my heart.
I'm hurting,
From unrequited love.
Time to let go,
Of this feeling,
Time to forget,
This love,
And start healing...
A contest entry
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i like the the rhyming is a bit of
thanx of entering -
This is good for the first little bit and thn you kinda start to loose your flow and rhyme pattern, but otherwise great work.
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this iss a good poem and the rythem is very good in the first two stanza's but it starts to fall apart in the 3rd one...it's a good poem but I think it would be better if you rythemed through the whole think rather than just part of it...thank you for entering
~*~An Unwritten Truth~*~ -
omg. i LOVE it.
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was that a lie too?
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BEAUTIFUL!!!! I love the last stanza because it's so overpowering. The imagery and flow were greatly done. Rhyme was also very well done. Stellar! Thanks for entering and good luck!
+ Jackie
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